Deleted Scenes
Apr 28, 2016 0:39:23 GMT -5
Post by Zen on Apr 28, 2016 0:39:23 GMT -5
This is for any time you're in the middle of a post, and go off on a tangent and accidentally steer everything off track. This happens to me sometimes, since most of my posts are improvised.
I'll start with a more humorous, alternate version of my latest S/T post.
Raphael
His entire body shivered and contorted, as fire leaked out of his armor and coated his body in black smoke. After this release he was back in his natural, human form, eyes fixated on his command seals. Two were now red, while the last remained the virgin gold. The stained glass still bathed the room in a flurry of light, but the reds were beginning to take over.
As he heaved and adjusted his vision, his right ear picked up the clicking sounds of light footsteps.
Claire... Claire... He rose with a feral look in his eyes, and looked as if on the verge of pouncing, but his eyesight was faster. It was Melissa who stood at the entrance.
"...You." He stood unevenly, his body still not fully within his control. "You're that girl that's always flanking Lorenzo."
"Y-yeah." She took a cautious step back. "What's going on in here?"
His eyes widened and narrowed unevenly, and he inhaled through his nose. Something seemed off about her. "That doesn't concern the likes of you."
"You keep saying that like you're some higher level citizen. What's up with that?"
"What's up with that?!" He finally composed himself and stood straight. "Such a pitiful little the women of this castle seem to know. I hail from the house of Mahagany, as I've said before."
"Aaaaaand, what's that?"
"You-" He growled under his breath, "-I-I descent from a family of top class mages far more powerful than you could comprehend."
"I can't comprehend it, and yet you somehow expect me to remember it?"
"That's not what I-" He ran his hands through his hair in frustration.
"Relax, I'm just giving you a hard time."
"I suggest you don't do anything to my time. Mine is precious, and I don't intend to waste it on idle banter on technicalities."
I'll start with a more humorous, alternate version of my latest S/T post.
Raphael
His entire body shivered and contorted, as fire leaked out of his armor and coated his body in black smoke. After this release he was back in his natural, human form, eyes fixated on his command seals. Two were now red, while the last remained the virgin gold. The stained glass still bathed the room in a flurry of light, but the reds were beginning to take over.
As he heaved and adjusted his vision, his right ear picked up the clicking sounds of light footsteps.
Claire... Claire... He rose with a feral look in his eyes, and looked as if on the verge of pouncing, but his eyesight was faster. It was Melissa who stood at the entrance.
"...You." He stood unevenly, his body still not fully within his control. "You're that girl that's always flanking Lorenzo."
"Y-yeah." She took a cautious step back. "What's going on in here?"
His eyes widened and narrowed unevenly, and he inhaled through his nose. Something seemed off about her. "That doesn't concern the likes of you."
"You keep saying that like you're some higher level citizen. What's up with that?"
"What's up with that?!" He finally composed himself and stood straight. "Such a pitiful little the women of this castle seem to know. I hail from the house of Mahagany, as I've said before."
"Aaaaaand, what's that?"
"You-" He growled under his breath, "-I-I descent from a family of top class mages far more powerful than you could comprehend."
"I can't comprehend it, and yet you somehow expect me to remember it?"
"That's not what I-" He ran his hands through his hair in frustration.
"Relax, I'm just giving you a hard time."
"I suggest you don't do anything to my time. Mine is precious, and I don't intend to waste it on idle banter on technicalities."